WE LIVE IN A WORLD WHICH ARE DENGEROUSLY INFLUENCED BY MEDIA IMAGES.
Introduction
Due to modern technological achievements in the 21 century , media is playing crucial part of the humankind’s life. During some certain period of time human’s mind got use to observing information form different sources. The information is food for the human’s brain moreover, addiction from this “food” is dramatically increasing . .
According to the American statistics nowadays humans watching TV 10 times more that 10 or 20 years ago ,60% of population spends about 30 ours weekly front of the TV. The picture is not different in Europe.
But is this necessary information demanding by the human brain is reliable? Do these sources which are provided by the media having a positive reflection on the humankinds moral and mental condition.
This essay will discuses the modern media’s negative affection on human mind, on their opinion and behavior, also it will evaluate authorities precious and the ways they use to control the media.
2 comments:
Good attempt. Some things to consider:
1. use of articles – some are missing; some are overused! :-((
2. use of some expressions – got used to. You may like to replace it with more academic sounding term such as ‘adapt to”. You can use the TOOLS (Thesaurus) in Microsoft Word to look for alternative terms to use when in doubt.
3. Think about your use of the word “humans”.
4. Will discusses??? Sounds a bit dodgy to me! Future ‘will’ form combined with present simple singular aspect?
5. “affection”, you mean love?
6. How is ‘mind’ different from ‘opinion’ or is it related to ‘mind’? Be clear about the concepts you would like to explore in your essay.
7. What do you mean by “authorities precious”?
8. Revise your introduction paying attention to the points raised above
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