Thursday, 27 November 2008

MY ESSAY

MEDIA’S DENGEROUSE INFLUENCE

Introduction


Due to modern technological achievements in the 21st century, media is playing crucial part of the humankind’s life. During some certain period of time society’s mind adapt to observing information form the different sources. Information is a food for the human brain moreover; addiction from this “food” is dramatically increasing.
But is this necessary information demanding by the human’s brain is reliable? Do these sources which are provided by the media, having a positive reflection on the society’s moral and the mental condition?
.Considerable number of scientists had agreed with the fact, that the media is the most powerful and practice weapon in our century.
American statistics had explored that nowadays the population in USA, watching TV 10 times more that 10 or 20 years ago, according to the same source more than 60% of the Americans spends about 30 ours weekly in front of the TV. The picture is not very different in Europe.This essay would discuses how dose media effects dangerously on the public in general on their life and their behavior .Also it will evaluate how tough is authorities pressure on the media, particularly in the powerful countries.

1 comment:

Dilek said...

Dearest Alex, I would start by suggesting that you use the spelling checker on the Word before you submit your introduction!
Other points that I suggest you ponder on:
• Use of present tenses - You may like to use the present perfect tense when you talk about something that have been going on for sometime.
• Use of ‘demanding’ – Demanding is an adjective, e.g. “She is very demanding.” !!!!!!
• Present tense questions (Simple Present tense questions: Do you work everyday?/Does he watch TV every night? Etc.)
• Past perfect followed by present simple tense???!!!!
• Modals would + verb e.g. I would go, I would like, I would discuss